A once1 vibrant city that can find a new success by looking to it's2 own roots.
Victoria3 BC4 is a city known world-wide for it's5 charm, history and beauty; yet these are the qualities now eroded in favor6 of buzz word7 politics. Getting back to baiscs8, back to the roots of Victoria BC9 is one way10 to find the path back to that deserved world-wide recognition.
1. Should be a hyphen here.
2. No apostrophe necessary. Excess apostrophes in this paragraph are its biggest flaw. It's awful. See what I did?
3. Comma here, even if it doesn't sound like there should be one.
4. So glad you mentioned BC--I thought we might be talking about Victoria, Texas.
5. Yep.
6. Should use Canadian spelling here: favour. Personally, I think it's a 20th century affectation but them's the rules.
7. Buzzword is one word. You can hyphenate it if you're want to sound like you're from the 1950s, daddy-o.
8. Ouch.
9, Thanks for the reminder. I was wondering if we wandered off to Victoria, Australia.
10. Or is that two ways? I've lost track.